We felt the fire the flame crawling out our lungs. Pain sweeping all over. Grade five cross country was let loose, dashing for victory itching to win. Family after family bringing hope. Losing all positivity, flashing, aching. First to finish takes all.
❤️Super great like awesome good job❤️
Elsie, this is a wonderful effort, but make sure you write in clear sentences rather than short bursts.
Ok I’ll update it now. Thanks for the tip :]
great explaining Elsie and you did great in the cross country.